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Writing
for the Ear
Be Sure Your Interactive
Narration Is Heard
Audio is
often one of the media in "multimedia." The spoken word can have tremendous
impact. But it can also fall flat if the text is ill-suited for oral delivery.
Writing that's
great for the eye is not always great for the ear. Here are some characteristics
to look for in your next audio script:
Conversational
Sure, there's
formal and informal speech. And it's often hard to make technical content
sound natural. But think about how you normally break up big ideas into
smaller units when speaking. This naturally leads to:
Short
Sentences
Long sentences
with a complicated grammatical structure (for example, with parenthetical
asides) are often difficult to comprehend when heard since the listener
has to reconstruct the meaning without the benefit of seeing the punctuation
or, in the case of certain lists, the layout's use of text sizes and styles,
plus other design elements. Instead, apply the old KISS rule: Keep It
Short and Simple. After all, even professional announcers have to breathe.
Clear
to Hear
Natural
speech runs some words together, particularly when vowel/consonant combinations
meet. Recently, for instance, I thought I heard a commercial say, "Your
doom, madam." That sounded rather ominous. However, I finally realized
the announcer was saying, "You're due, madam." Quite a different message.
Poetic
Recall the
rhyme, rhythm, and resonance of good poetry. Lift a lesson about lovely
alliteration. The brain will retain what the ear likes to hear.
Summary
The best
way to test audio writing is to read the work aloud and really listen
to it. For example, test this article. See if you can tell which parts
work when spoken (hint: not all do). Check all your copy this way BEFORE
you give it to the narrator. Your listeners will be glad you did.
Copyright © 1997 Judy Nollet
White Plume Communications
"clear, concise writing matched to the medium"
WhitePlume[at]comcast.net
651-994-6712
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